What is Analysis?
Ever dissected a frog? If
you did that just to cut it up, you would be guilty of cruelty. One
dissects a frog to learn how and why things inside the frog work as they
do. Why have two arteries here, not one? Generally, all analysis gets
beyond mere description and into examination and explanation.
The same principles apply to essays. Consider
these examples, from a hypothetical final exam in the Core class :
Example 1: This quotation comes from
Freud's Civilization and its Discontents. Here, Freud implies
that man will only be happy when living according to the pleasure
principle. The pleasure principle leads people to do or desire things
that bring them pleasure. Freud presents a good point here, and he
uses many examples throughout the text to support it.
Example 2: This quotation contains a
central concept of Freud's psychology: humans are driven by the
pleasure principle and are most happy when fulfilling its demands. As
Freud notes elsewhere in the text, the ego and superego play the roles
of watchdogs, keeping the demands of the pleasure principle in check
through the moderating influences of experience (Freud's reality
principle) and morality. For Freud, this battle within the personality
gets reflected in a society. The society passes laws that limit our
freedom, and therefore our happiness, but encourage order and
morality. Freud notes that the exchange of happiness for security is,
in the end, worthwhile and necessary to maintaining a civilization.
Analysis does not equal description (but can use
description). The second example is clearly stronger, since it
"gets beneath the surface," going beyond describing
ideas to examining the relationship between ideas. The writer is clearly
"present" in the second example, showing the reader how Freud
makes the leap from individual to society. In the first case, the writer
only tells us what Freud says, not how or why Freud drew
his conclusions.
Using Analysis
There are many sorts of analysis. The ones given
"stay within the text." Another possible analysis might
involve applying Freud's ideas to another text or a current issue. Any
analysis will consider the data in enough depth, and with enough
clarity, to convince the reader, even one who disagrees with the
writer's conclusions, that the analysis has been made well. |