| Organizing Multiple Subject Papers
Many
assignments will ask you to compare or contrast two (or more) different
things, such as a past lifestyle and a present one, or a common issue in
two literary works. When you write these sorts of papers, try to
integrate your sets of ideas as much as possible.
Try to isolate several issues to discuss. For a
sample history paper, let's assume that you have decided to discuss
marriage customs in two societies. If you discuss marriage customs in
the Middle Ages and then switch to discuss the life of a young person in
the present, it is clear that you haven't planned your paper well.
Instead, choose closely related issues; for
example, you might choose to talk about marriage and child raising in
both societies. You might organize the paper like this:
- A. Marriage
- 1. The Middle Ages
- 2. Today
- B. Child Raising
As you work on the part of the paper that
discusses the present, remember what you just said about the Middle
Ages. You may begin some sentences with phrases such as these: "As
compared to the Middle Ages..." or "On the other hand,
today...." Be sure to move back and forth between the two time
periods you discuss so that there are not two distinct and independent
sections of your paper.
Avoiding the "Two
Essay" Trap
There is a danger that such an essay might
resemble two "mini-essays," one about marriage and the other
about children. Using strong transitions would help, or you might
consider a second organizational option. First, discuss the Middle Ages;
you could deal with marriage and child raising in that era, then
marriage and child raising today. This paper would look like this:
- A. Middle Ages
- 1. Marriage
- 2. Child Raising
- B. Today
- 1. Marriage
- 2. Child Raising
As you plan your own papers, decide which approach
(perhaps you can come up with another approach on you own), would work
best with your assignment. Make several outlines and sketch out your
ideas before you decide which is best. |